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Death is Nothing

I find you lying here forever dead.
Your once warm skin is now turned stone cold.
Many clashing thoughts dance inside my head.
As I recall the truth I should have told.

My eyes locked upon your beautiful face.
As my mind fills with words I wish to say.
I reach out to touch my angel from grace.
For it is my fault I found you this way.

I realize your love I do accept.
So now to finish this horrid strife
To now put to sleep all of my regrets.
Into my heart I will plunge your knife.

So now I can always stand by your side.
Because of true love we both took our life.  

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  • Icry4YOU2mrow
    October 15, 2007

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    yeah it is kinda like romeo & jullett but in these days its no romeo & julleite it can be to romoes or two julliets wow i spelled her name 3 differnt ways in this whole sentnece. lol neways very sweet piece sweetie keep it up!


  • littlejen
    October 15, 2007
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    romeo and juliet, reflective.