Like the red-ripened apple
you've caught my fancy
I'm into you like sticky glue
Locking my heart down
waiting for you only
here's the key, enter me
Caught a flash from my past
it was horrible(they had no class)
I need you, only you will do
Immersed in your essence
my desire and destiny
can this be? a possibility?
So fruitless to go after
what I don't desire
it's you for me, beyond fantasy
I can't escape
how you make me feel
my desire, your fire.
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^^ - these are my sneaker doodles, hope they work for you.
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- Show Me How by Paulies Cracker.
430 points, ended November 6, 2007, 25 entries
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well, I think i get what you are saying. this is your love and desire. have fun. thanks for sharing.
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great rhyme...your so lovely...a great piece!
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Thanks amigo, muchos gracious, is this right? hahaha I am trying
lol
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muchas gracias...then I say-de nada
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Got it...thanks, friend
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that's amigo to you.lol
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thank you so much... this made me smile... especially the part that says "I'm into you like sticky glue" it was so cute. i give you a 12 from 1-10 lol....keep up the good work and good luck!
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Wow, a 12 that's so great...thanks bucketslol
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