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the beginning

i remember that day
when you nearly died
and we tried so hard so find a way
but in the end, i had to give up
i had to let you go
we even tried to switch our powers
so that i could heal you
but i couldn't do it no matter how hard i tried

now i can remember all the times we spent together
all the good and bad
wyatt and chris all the drama that they brought to us
and how none of that would of happened
if on that day
the day you nearly died
i hadn't of admitted what i felt
to myself as well as you
and with the glow from my hands, healing your wounds
my heart glowed the same, with a love so pure and true
a relief so deep, i can't even explain

that was the beginning
of everything afterwards
you were my one and only love
and i will forever love you
with every last breath i ever took,
it was for you
for us

*whispers* "I love you"

Author notes

my fave piper and leo moment was near the beginning when he got shot by the darklighter and pipers love was the thing that saved him, made me cry...
so i based the poem on the episode
p.s...i LOVE charmed!!!!!
XD

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 19, 2007

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    a great write!
    tragedy, emotion and an epiphany of truth.
    a cracking read from beginning to end.
    well done! keep up the good work!


  • alexandra.
    October 21, 2007
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    Charmed is PENG!


    great write.


  • TwilightDazzles
    October 15, 2007

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    Ohhh that episode, I think I cried more than I have ever cried in my life. That was a great thing to incorporate into a write on Piper and Leo. Reading this made my eyes tear up all over again. Thanks for entering this! And best wishes