If I could tell you how I feel with no words spoken,
With something as simple as a look.
Would you know that I love you?
Or would you miss what I was trying to say?
Most people will never have these feelings,
They are rare and hard to find.
But the few who get to experience true love,
Never know just how lucky they are.
They take it for granted
And only when they lose what is most dear to them,
Do they realize how incredible their love was.
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- No RULES by Lost-Lezzy-15.
300 points, ended October 24, 2007, 3 entries
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Comments
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Interesting, reminds me of one i wort a while back. I'm not getting the flow of it which makes it hard to feel. But its true, most don't realize what they have until its gone.
keep writing
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