Your leaving
and i dont know what to do
i love you so much
but no matter what i do
you will never love me
you just play with me
you have changed so much after we lost
our little girl
you acted like you loved me
but i guess it is not true
now i have to go though
you leaving to
i cant stop crying
knowing that soon you will be away
maybe one day you will see
that no one will love you like me
then you will be the one crying
Author notes
I dont care about the spelling right now. i wrote this because its all true....live in the giant pumpkin
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omg i love this poem very recently a very special guy and i were together and i was gunna have a baby but sadly i had miscarrage and our relationship hasn't been the same since i think he is going to leave me soon so this poem is so touching to me and i love the way you wrothe it i'm pleased you entered the contest and wish you the best of luck
lil
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Your day will come but you can't see that yet. My daughter has gone through the same as you and thought she would never love again. There did come a day though when, out of the blue, she felt free and you will too. You will never ever forget but you will be able to live your life and remember the good bits with a smile. It has been a sad part of your life but you will move on. Keep writing though because it has enabled you to give your feelings a way out in which many others can also relate to. Well done for this write.
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Emotional
This carries such heartbreaking emotion with it. I'm so sorry for you loss but VampedPlaymate is right, they stay in your heart forever and become part of who you are. No~one is ever truly gone, not when they were loved so much. This is a fantastic write with a superb flow. Best of luck not only in the contest but in the future to.
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awwee...
This is sad.. full of emotion.
I'm sorry you feel like this
I really am.
But don't worry, atleast Mezeker will never leave you.
She'll be in your heart forever and always.
things will get better hun.
Stay strong.
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Awwww, i'm sorry hunni!!
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