It wasn't really meant for you
The words I spoke were untrue
Drunken words & agitation
Remembrance of connotation
Wishing I hadn't Drunk...Drank?
If I remember you were...Blank?
Life is, Misunderstanding
I was in my tone demanding
Sick of bullshit,sick of lies
& in my sickness our demise
So sorry I am for what i said
Even if....... you want me dead
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I think that your ... delays in the text perform their function very well in the sense that it gives the reader the impression of one grasping to know the right thing to say; perhaps because they know that their words are walking on thin ice.
Interesting how this was never one of the consequences we discussed. ;-|
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lemme guess...angie? very well written, and very interesting
!!! 3 stars!!!
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wow, this is great! I love this! it's just... wow... you did a wonderful job writing this! keep it up!
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