a cat sleeps
between light and shadows
the patchwork quilt
In a list
A contest entry
- The Haiku-Patchwork Quilt Contest-Project by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended October 21, 2007, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nicely done.
Doesn't make a Haiku....from what I learned. The subject and count are different. But a beautiful write, none the less..
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Haiku do not have to be restricted to 17 syllables, here is a good column from the front page on haiku:
http://allpoetry.com/column/423262
Thank you so much for reading my haiku, I appreciate it.
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I'm lovin it, great Haiku. Congrats on the bronze.
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Susie
I very nice kittyku. This paints a wonderful picture that fits right in with the theme of a patchwork quilt. -
Very nice, weaving the kitty into the dappled light and contrasts of a patchwork quilt! Great imagery!
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WOW! Very beautiful imagery here. I think Jo will like this I love the contrast of light vs. shadows. Delightful aha moment here.
All the best.
Charishma
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so nicely done azure ... i love the pivot of light and shadows ... >>> Gina
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I really love the cozy image you've drawn by this haiku, Susie. The play of light and shadows filling the room, and the contented kitty sleeping becoming a part of the patchwork of the quilt.
Lovely writing, and see what I mean about NOT co-hosting contests with you? I would've missed this exquisite entry otherwise.
Thank you so much for this haiku-entry and your contribution to the haiku-quilt--(which is growing so wide I'll have to call it the Football Field Haiku Quilt Project soon!
Jo -
I really love the cozy image you've drawn by this haiku, Susie. The play of light and shadows filling the room, and the contented kitty sleeping becoming a part of the patchwork of the quilt.
Lovely writing, and see what I mean about NOT co-hosting contests with you? I would've missed this exquisite entry otherwise.
Thank you so much for this haiku-entry and your contribution to the haiku-quilt--(which is growing so wide I'll have to call it the Football Field Haiku Quilt Project soon!
Jo
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