Shivering,
drenched in rain.
Under the stars of pure beauty.
Breathing in the taste of cinnimon from your gum,
and wondering when your going to kiss me with those lips.
Wishing for that one shooting star,
that will light the way for us.
Shimmering glitter falling from naked shoulders,
that gave me that glowing look.
As you ask me to dance,
I sigh in relief and take your hands.
Finally dancing in your arms,
under the rain,
you look at me longingly,
and kiss me.
Finally,
the warmth seeps through me,
as I try to keep my shaking knees in place.
I've never felt this way before,
never felt like falling,
knowing you'll catch me in your arms.
And as I close my eyes under the sprinkling rain,
in your arms and breathing in the cinnimon.
I know I've fallen in love.
A contest entry
- Remind Me of the One I Love by Dlvvanzor.
1200 points, ended October 16, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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Awww, that's so sweet. Great write! You really love someone.
Thanks for entering,
-Dlvvanzor

