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Haiku #3

Moist velvet petals
pressed between satin fingers
ripple on the dew

A contest entry

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  • UnchartedPoet
    October 24, 2007

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    Beaugtful, a perfect picture drawn for me with your choice of words, well done. Congrats on the HM.

    Jen


  • NoWayJo
    October 15, 2007

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    Hi Liquid! Really lovely image of flower-petals you have drawn by this haiku. It's almost as to smell those roses and feel the velvet-soft of the petals.

    Graphic #6 has already been filled to the contest, but can I interest you in Graphic #3??? I think it's actually a quilt pattern of rose buds--It is the way it appears to me. Lemme know if it's OK by you and I'll post this entry to the haiku-quilt.

    Jo


    • NoWayJo
      October 15, 2007
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      Hi again, Liquid! Only to let you know, I slipped your entry to Slot #3 as I had mentioned. I had reserved this slot for you in my name, but it added me as an extra entry to the contest along with yours. Since the contest is filling so quickly I didn't want it to close with one entry missing in the haiku-quilt, so I hope you don't mind.

      Jo

      P.S.: If you would, please edit the title of this entry to Haiku #3 so it won't be too confusing. THANKS!!!