woven with love
lives sewn upon layers
memories remain
Author notes
I know this is actually a senyru but it is labeled according to the contest rules thus... is titled Haiku #27
A contest entry
- The Haiku-Patchwork Quilt Contest-Project by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended October 21, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good write, like the live sewn in this one. Congrats on the HM.
Jen -
Suzi, You've got gold in this write! It says so much in so little words! Now that is talent
GBY
SilverButterfly
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Lovely expression that our lives don't only touch, but overlap. The strength of underlying, perhaps invisible layers, supports us by examples of love and character in the patterns we choose to conform to. Memories remain, to be shared with the future. Nicely done!
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A beautiful senryu indeed. I like the alliteration and assonance here. I think you need a hyphen at the end of L2 to show juxtaposition has occurred there. This is nostalgic for me..Beautiful work!
Charishma
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How very true! I couldn't tell you the difference between Haiku and senyru......LOL. But my dear friend are sooooo talented, that you can write in many forms, and leave me in awe! Great job!
Best of luck in the contest!
and love you bunches and bunches
Nyetta
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Suzi! You're back! I'm so happy you're back and I hope you've been feeling better. I have been thinking of you...Only last week I was going through some of those old poem-posts of mine and uncovered that TP collaboration we had been writing and laughing over. It's so great to see you, Girl!
I really like that sensation of loving memories passed generation-to-generation you have drawn through this haiku. It's a lovely entry and contribution to the haiku-quilt, too. Thank you so very much!
Jo
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