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What have I done?

What have I done to get you so mad?

Nothing I can do.

All I can say is i'm sorry.

But that's obviously not enough.

What do you want?

What is it i've done?

What have you against me?

Can ya tell me, kid?

Or are you through with anything I might have to say?



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Ok, look, my bad it is not as well written as my other things, but i'm a bit rusty lol.

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  • Queens 718 All Day
    October 20, 2007

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    no...it's perfectly said...

    i want to say something...but I dont have the time...I want to hit something...but I remember that promise of mine...You say u did something...To make someone mad...Tell me, how r u gonna repent...For this, I do not understand.


    • TheMuffinSlayer
      October 21, 2007
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      eh? What? Ok...i'm sorry if I don't understand the comment, my I.Q. is dropping by the minute.

      • Queens 718 All Day
        October 25, 2007
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        my meaning is that u said its not as good as ur other writes, that's not true. it's probably the only one I really do understand. but wat I dont get is that u said u made someone mad. I'm wondering what ur going to do to repent, wat ur going to do to make them happy again.and the "I want to say something.........I want to hit something" is self-explanatory.