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Such a smooth canvas
Unblemished like buttermilk
Leaving eyes starving.

Art exquisite beyond false words
Behind lines, tempted to touch.

♦x♥x♦

Author notes

Straight girls are like art in museums. Untouchable
.ugh.

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  • ISheHer
    October 30, 2007
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    congrats on beating me lol
    proof your a better poet lol


  • ISheHer
    October 15, 2007
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    lol i know the feeling, this is a great poem.. i really like it..


  • Number 13
    October 15, 2007

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    Aw, this is lovely.
    Ha, yes, liking a straight girl has got to be the worst.

    Good luck in the contest!


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 15, 2007

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    Is someone fancying a straight girl? Sorry just the first thing that came to mind as I read what you wrote in your authors notes. I must agree though. I enjoyed it. I must confess I did fancy a straight girl at some point. Thanks for the read. Thanks for entering and good luck.