Finally, my skies are clearing
My life is vibrant blue
but you still dwell
in your own hell
in shades of gray
and deepest black
I offer you my hand
dance with me
forget everything
for once, just let go
you can never be sure
of what you really know
my electric blue,
lime green existence
colors my every move
I'll let you borrow my
candy apple red
and Laffy-taffy yellow
try some deep clean green
and tangy orange
can you taste the color sensation?
sour, sweet, beautiful
bitter black
and tasteless white
are too bland
for you
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by Beating.
450 points, ended December 14, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow! i really like how you use colours in this! It has such a good feel to is, and just made me happy! Very well written and good job!
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Oh wow, so fun an Laffy-Taffy istic! Nice!
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Thanks, glad you like it!
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terrific
i'm a rainbow kinda guy
so i was drawn by the title
superb
i like the denotation of the title in relation to the wonderful write
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I'm glad you like it!
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