Why won't you let me be
Mister Mortality
Let me stand on my own
Experience things you don't condone
Living young could be so fun
Playing here till the world is done
Parting with a com rad
Could NEVER be that bad
But Night after Night it gets so lonely
Everything feels so....Phony
Doesn't much matter who I fuck
It seems I've just run out of luck
Drinking & Drugging isn't enough
& suddenly I don't feel so tough
Just please stay with me
Mister Mortality
I'll be yours and you'll be mine
forever together sounds divine
Forever is a term to its meaning unfair
Reality starts looking like a nightmare
without you mister everything is empty
I miss the bliss of your simplicity
Watching you wishing to be
Watching with me
years pass day by day
We Fade away
We are meant to be
Miss Murder and Mister Mortality
Author notes
Also Crapppppppp
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May I just say
that what I just read was a work of art. . .
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This is brilliant all the way up until the end where you perform a reversal of your norm. I like the last two lines but the five leading up to it are not very supportive of either the earlier parts of the piece or the final ending. Also, as good as it could be, the ending itself doesn't connect very well with what I feel you are trying to say in the first place. In that sense this piece feels a bit out of focus.
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