You pulled maryjane from my hair
as I giggled beneath the street light's glow
a prelude to your ravishing tongue
and its deviant ways.
The East side's cobbled streets
tickled my frozen feet
as it trailed away to your car
and the promise of warmth within.
You feel so familiar.
While the radio spun a tale
of lustful rebellion
I knew exactly
what Jim was talking about.
'Cause I was singing too
inside our cheap cocoon
bet you didn't see this coming
back when you let me steal your hat.
In those few breathless moments
before lips connect and drive us senseless
your eyes told my story
like you'd written it yourself.
God this feels so good.
Past the midnight steam
and the wind's October scream
we could faintly hear the laughter
of drunken friends in the night.
But our focus now on skin
moist and begging to give in
took this world away
and we were infinite in our carelessness.
Pray this never ends.
Author notes
God my thoughts are so jumbled - but it felt good to write this.
Please tell me what you think
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i like this poem... it made me remember the nights of this summer. I enjoyed this poem a whole bunch. It made me remember the fun of this summer. The name of the poem was what drawn me into read it. My summer was spend with a group of my friends and we stayed drunken up all summer long. I kept praying that the summer never ended.. I have to give you props on this poem it was very interesting! Good JOB!
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very good i felt like i was the character!
i love that line "the radio spun a tale of lustful rebellion". dont we all have a story about a night like that? you told it very well. i adore!
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LOVE IT!!!
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ahh... this is awesome. i love your imagery and emotion and amazing word choice.
i love this: "In those few breathless moments
before lips connect and drive us senseless"... really nice.
:-)
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it felt so good to read it, too.
wow. it makes me crave summer. and summer romances. wow. I FELT this. seriously fabulously written. I fucking love how you bring me into those moments and leave me there. it takes real, raw talent. -
this is prettttyyyyy!
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i love your writing...
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