i sit in this classroom
sitting day by day
watching you watch me
wondering what your thinking
do you think of me as i think of you?
do you wonder if i think of you?
cause to tell you the truth
i do.
i woner if you think of me
i wonder if youll think im crazy
i wonder when i felt this much
i wonder what to do
i wonder if im going mad
i wonder if youll love me still
if you knew i love you.
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This poem is very deep and really sweet. It speaks of the questions that come with falling in love with someone wonderfing if they have done the same. I really look forward to reading more of yours. Keep up the excellent work. Awesome job with this.
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ello robyn, i must say this is an intresting piece, short concise yet it projecs such a powerful message keep it up. bless'ed be
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hey! thank you! im glad you like it! but yes, i put the wrong authors note. its for...nevermind, buti hope i can fix it..
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Wow, this is deep. Very deep. I wonder. There's so much to wonder about. This must be for some guy you may like? I think that's the way I took it anyways. But hey, this was great. Thanks for sharing this with us
Have a blessed and wonderful day my friend
God Bless You!!
Charles
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thank you./ yes, it is about a guy i like but he doesnt notice. i hope you have a wonderful day.
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