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Goosebumps

Sitting before me
Topless,
Pink nipples point
In erected lust-
I start to unbutton your pants…
You let me

Your body-
So familiar 
I admire the way
It curves and retracts

I touch you
The way I like to be touched…
Fingers heavy and hard
Between your legs
White cotton panties
Rubbing your vulva-
Oh so sweetly moistened

I can tell it’s your first time…

I want to be the one
To kiss you like no other
With a gentle tongue
That curls in rhythm,
Pestering your clit…
Just the way you do it to yourself

So I do.

Pretty hairless pussy
Pulsing before me
I fondle you with my mouth (such a dirty mouth)
Licking and sucking
Swallowing your cum

Goose bumps
Line those spread, tanned legs
Making me think
“How cute”

You’re the type of girl I could love

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  • Bartholomew Mole
    January 29, 2008
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    "I want to be the one
    To kiss you like no other
    With a gentle tongue
    That curls in rhythm,
    Pestering your clit…
    Just the way you do it to yourself"

    Barty laughed till he wet himself at this bit! Wow she must have long abrasive tongue to pester her own clit! Or maybe giant clit! Ho ho ho. Reminds me of my sister Brunnhilde.


  • N e a r
    January 28, 2008
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    Love the vivid detail and the way you make it sound sensual and beautiful, even being a sexual poem. The only thing I dislike is the word "pussy" in it, because I tend to find that slang weakens a poem.

    Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • Violent Glass
    January 27, 2008

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    wow
    this defiantly made me feel something
    talk about getting horny over here
    thanx for entering my contest


  • Mrs. Serial Killa
    January 27, 2008
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    nICE POEM!


  • Brazos silver member
    January 22, 2008
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    Very erotic, wonderful imagery.

    Thanks so much for entering our contest.

    Brazos


  • ennovy silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    Beautiful erotic entree full of passion, and you have painted a vivid picture of rainbow love. Thank you for entering my contest.......novy


  • JULzz- ROLaa
    October 16, 2007

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    wonderful imagery one can get out of this...I sure did cant remember the last time i got goosebumps wiht a guy....i guess itll be left sacred for my sex. loved it


  • Menace
    October 15, 2007
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    Speechless, but definitely not woithout thoughts.


  • autumns rising
    October 15, 2007

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    "I want to be the one
    To kiss you like no other"

    Great lines. this was amazing. Awesome job capturing the affection and the lust between to people. Good Luck!

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