So clever,
Whatever,
I'm done with these endeavors,
Alone I walk the winding way,
Here I stay,
It's over,
No longer,
I feel it growing stronger.
I'll live to die another day.
Until I fade away.
Why give up? Why give in?
It's not enough. It never is.
But I will go on until the end.
We've become desolate,
It's not enough, it never is.
I will go on until the end.
Surround me,
It's easy,
To fall apart completely.
I feel you creeping up again.
In my head.
It's over,
No longer,
I feel it growing colder
I knew this day would come to end.
So let this life begin.
Why give up, why give in?
It's not enough it never is.
So i will go on until the end.
We've become desolate.
It's not enough, it never is.,
But I will go on until the end.
I've lost my way.
I've lost my way, but I will go on until the end.
Living is hard enough,
Without you fucking up.
Why give up, why give in?
It's not enough, it never is.
So I will go until the end.
We've become desolate
It's not enough, it never is.
But I will go on until the end.
I've lost my way,
I've lost my way, but i will go on til the end.
The final fight i will win,
But I will go on until the end.
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This one was shown to me by a good friend...right in the midst of an abuseive relationship...it opened my eyes to what I hid inside...
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love this band, I like to listen to music like this when I feel sad, makes me feel better in a strange way, I just wrote a poem using some deftones lyrics, kind of a way to explain what i'm thinking when I listen to them.
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SoulSerenity
ME too!! Music is my life!!
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These lyrics are really nice, and written in a style similar to how i have written poetry many times, only i dont think you wrote this is a friend showed it to you... I wonder how the accompanying tune goes...?
Are applause applicable??
*pause*
... DID you write this?
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satanic-faery
I love this band...they've gotten me through some rough times...and applause is more than welcome..**laughs softly** If you're interested in rock...check out my Flaw lyrics i've got on here...they're recent...and that band has saved me from many tears and sad filled days...along with happy cheery days...they are amazing and their lyrics...well..my god....is the best way to put it
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a very emotional piece, much repetition which works in this. Very well written, well done. x
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Powerful write. This had a good flow. it seemed to have a feeling of strength in it. It made me think of if someone were to go through something terrible like an abusive relationship, they could try to find the strength within themselves to break it off and walk away from a person bringing them pain in life. Thanks for sharing this poem.
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It's a beauty...I love it...songs are the best poems out there when the artist writes it from the soul.
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