my eyes see through your lies it hurts to think
about why im this way
i can no longer fly because
your betrayel has broken my wings and
killed the beaut of the night sky
A contest entry
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Comments
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thanks for the entry....
good luck -
Thank you for your heartfelt entry, Josephine
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I like your write here. Sounds hurt, the poem. I liked 'your betrayel has broken my wings'
good job!
the forest vampire child^-^V
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sad write but very well writen keep up the great work.
Amber aka midnight eyes
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