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Gods son

The lights are bright for you
The sun, a new feeling likr golden silk on your skin
To breath its the only thing you want to do
They look upon you hapy, faces full with smiles
to talk, you know these words
Cradled in the arms of love
your version blurred

Now as you open your eyes
The lights are bright for you
Do you know the feeling?, for you to cry
Now as they look down on you discontent covers there faces
You reach out for love the hold you had before
This you remember but never did you see
Through closed eyes dreams carried you through time,space and more

Now as you close your mouth
Your lips do stick dry yet moist
In your mind all this boubt
Your dreams are ending with this beeb
Remember all you felt in that first moments doubt
happiness filled a giant heart so small
A little man so tiny and fragile, A little man
Arms so free likeness in joy and you love it all

Now as you yawn your arms fixed you now draw a breath and know to cry
Thoughts racing now are mixed
"where am I? Mammy?
They stare down at you and smile, mixed
A sense of complexity about it
All you want is mammy
Now they wonder, "will it fit"

The light is bright for you
So take it was taken away
Nothing left to view
Dreams have gome, you dont know waht to do
You will be forever more
This will read
"Here lies Gods son, born 12/11/00 died 15/11/00

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