It’s Nothing Like Loving You
By: Tralika M.
I been dying in misery missing you
Thinking about you
Loving you
Hating you
forgiving you
Wanting to be everything
To you
With out interference
Memories of being in your favor
Has been seized
But the way I feel
When hearing your voice
Just for a few secs
Makes me put the reality of you and me in check
What’s next when I want you
Do you like taunting me
I can be like the foods feed
La da la
Remember those words singing
Crossing my heart
Being your wife of excepting everything
Even wrong things that’s not
My fault
I love you still
Everything I want with you is my will
I love my wifey of erotic blissful cheers
Author notes
A.P. Wife
I Love Julia not for play but
honestly. To You From Tralika
A contest entry
- The Beginning of Essence 1 Females Only, dedicated to Julia (ADULT) by Riftkin.
475 points, ended October 19, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I Love This Woman
Comments
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A very good write marvelous ending Bravo.
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I am glad my contest
was able to bring a smile
to Julia's lips
and to your heart
Riftkin -
Sexy without trying
There is something so sexy about this peice but I can't put my finger on it exactly. I'm going to read over it again but it's very enticing and the verbiage makes me want to lick the bowl~LOL
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this was very intense and deep i am taking it that this sister is a rainbow at twisted love if so she is a great poet and deserves the love and you did hocus pocus with this best wishes to you in the contest poet
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful poem, I am sure that the women you love, loved this poem as well, and holds it close to her heart, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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A wonderful write
that I have no doubt Julia will love
~sugar~
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Wonderful write
I'm sure Julia will love the sensuality in this piece. Very classy lyrics you got here...very classy.
ephiphany
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Oh what a wonderful expression of love....
great job with this dedication.
delila
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You expressed your love strongly for her in this. I really feel the need for love in this. Hope you do well in the contest!
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Hot Shit
I really like this one. this is the shit and it explains your love very well. wish i canhave someone love me like that. you are the best at describing your emotions and i like that type of flow. do what you do and let it show. keep writing and i'll keep reading.
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o damn! this was exstremely piercing i think you mae this contest my dear sweet riftkin through very challenging lucky im not the judge as im a sucker to this type of crap damn i love you Tralika I guess this means your not pissed with me no more
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