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Precious Rain Girls Ocean View

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Welcome to the Precious Rain Girls' ocean view.

Even that body of water is in love with her too!

Each sparkling drop is trying to reach her shore.

Is it any wonder why she is so loved and adored

She's like an angel adrift in a lovely paradise.

It's the reason why I love the rain through her eyes.

She won my heart over and became my world!

My love will always live on for my Precious Rain Girl.

Author notes

Saw this picture as a prompt in a contest. I knew my poem wouldn't fit the criteria, but I had to make another prequel poem to the contest of the screen name of:

http://allpoetry.com/PreciousRainGirl

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2372592

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  • Midnight Lace
    October 16, 2007

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    I truly admire the innovative and imaginative talent that I see busy at work here, flowing across the page in all its glory. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace


  • ennovy silver member
    October 16, 2007

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    Excellent & Suave

    The picture is totally awesome and the perfect prompt to inspire a contest. This write speaks volumns and you love for the elements sweeps into the hearts of your readers..........novy


  • Tears of Roses
    October 15, 2007

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    wonderful
    I love the poem and
    I just love the picture too.
    Roses to you

    Teresa


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      October 15, 2007
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      Thank you very much and I fell in love with the picture myself.

      Ted E

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