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Can you see the bitter lies
that hide beneath these dark brown eyes?
Can you see the truth inside
where fear and darkness lies?
Waiting for a chance of weakness
for my mind to snap.
Waiting patiently in silence
for these thoughts to crack.
My imagination holds the secrets
where the beast resides,
holding on to pain and anger
pushing love aside.
My emotions chain the creature
keeping mortals safe.
For only death and destruction
can follow her escape.


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Ever felt like there was someone else looking through your eyes at the world,an angry, bitter person with the capacity for danger?
if anyone likes this and would like to offer a title I'm all ears,i cant think of one right now.

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  • karabi
    November 7, 2007

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    HEART BREAKING

    'holding on to pain and anger
    pushing love aside.'- nothing can be truer than this. When love dies only pain remains. It's heart breaking but we have to live our life!


  • Lady Eclipse
    October 17, 2007

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    These words make me think about all i'm hiding from people in my lives. stuff only my shrink would know. Glad you wrote this and I hope you think of a title soon because words like these deserve one. ~Eclipse