a broken heart
needs time to heel
and mine is no exeption
you carry on like ive no feeling
you dont care 'cos i dont show the pain
i smile, tell you that everything is alright
when in reality, its not
i cry inside
today just a little
tomorow a little more
how long before you realise
im dying more with every word
you offer no comfort for a troubled soul
when your supposed to be a friend
i act strong
when in fact im week
i try not to show it you know
but i dont know how long i can carry on
my heart is breaking, your not helping me heal
and yet you carry on with words that you know dont make it better
when will you realise
you have damaged me
perhaps a little beyond repair
i may be ugly i may be unpopular
but im still a human being cant you see
im not just a person, im a person about to break
and all because of you i dont know what shall become of me
my broken heart neads time to heal
A contest entry
- Cut Me by My Last Breath.x.
450 points, ended November 30, 2007, 33 entries
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Comments
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great write, I can truly relate to this piece. I've had plenty broken hearts. Keep your head up! thanks for reading my work. I really appreciate it!!
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I hear ya sista.I know how you feel.I bet you aren't ugly.Don't call yourself ugly nobody is ugly.Maybe some people in their Personalities, but ur definetely not ugly in yours.I like how your write goes.Sad.Hope your okay.I know how you feel again.Keep up the good work.Keep strong girl!
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