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Hurt

No one knows
She shields her face
hiding her emotins
Why did it end this way
what did she do
was it something she said
the world is dark and gray without him
she can't think straight
with a tear stained face
tired of life
she feels forgotten
where will she go from here
will she ever forget him.
will the tears ever stop.
she wants the pain to stop
what has happened to her

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Sami

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  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Way too many personal nouns - apart from that a gripping and emotional entry.

    Thanks for entering,