are winning pennants
just a dream or trinkets to
disire all within?
tomorrow washed hope
virtues in neat little chest
full boxes of dreams
desires, revive, spite
trouble future, never gave
espectations to
posibility
as optimistic approach
never intend, raise
In a list
A contest entry
- Pay it forward........Hope...20 entries, 50 words, picture inspired. by Mr C.
500 points, ended October 17, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for entering my Pay It Forward contest- I have re-opened it a couple of times, hoping to get some more entries. I like this piece a lot; it kind of speaks to me on many levels.
I'm unsure what "optimictic" means, I suspect it is just a typo that you can fix before the judging.
Best of luck with this fine submission. -
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Thank u
I'm glad u pointed that out to me it is a typo, and I'm glad u liked my poem. Thank for stopping by and the critique given here. Haley27
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