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At the court of the queen of thieves

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Tabitha, so fair is she

Surveying me from gnarled oak tree,

Where her stripes merge with the shade

That boughs and evening sun have made.

 

While fin and tail lie on the lawn

She stretches with a sated yawn.

 

Oh woe is me, no supper plate,

Fish monger's closed for it is late,

I'll have to sup on bread and cheese

While Tabitha takes evening breeze.

 

Last week is was a piece of steak,

Left on the table, my mistake.

 

No wonder she's so sleek and fat

This queen of thieves, my tabby cat.

With nonchalance she looks around

Then lightly jumps to misty ground.

 

For there's a nip in autumn's air,

And beside the fire a waiting chair,

And as I listen to her purr,

I know my anger I'll defer.

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  • midnightblue1272
    October 22, 2007
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    Chuckle

    I got a chuckle out of this one. Fine work.


  • NotAMolly
    October 15, 2007
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    That was realy fun! great poem, I like the relationship between you and your pet. Very sweet.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 15, 2007
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    Great entry and love the rhythm and music and the tale of
    Tabitha! Good luck in the contest!


  • suseann
    October 15, 2007

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    This type "cat burglar" is one more acceptable by far than the humankind.At least as with the wild in general. You know what to more expect in motive. Ha! This fabulous metered rhyme is the cat's meow!


  • AerinAlanna
    October 15, 2007
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    I love the descriptive language you use! The poem has a really nonchalant feel to it, which is wonderful. In the first stanza, second line, you have a typo. It should be surveying, which you accidentally spelled wrong.

    Again, this poem is really great. It made my day today.

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