I am alone today,
Missing you,
the day crawls by,
I still think about what I said to you,
I wish i could take it back,
Eat all my words and let them die within me,
I still remember the look on your face,
Thinking about it now,
Crying is the only thing i can to do,
Your eyes so lost,
Searching for some kind of signal on my face,
I saw the tears in your eyes,
I know I put them there,
My wish is that i could take back,
Everything,
All of it,
Every tear,
Every word,
Every hit,
Everything but,
I love you.
A contest entry
- Love's true Meaning by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
360 points, ended October 31, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Please, inspire me. by GossamerAlice.
700 points, ended May 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so powerful.
It is amazing, isn't it? How just one moment in a lifetime can produce such never-wavering regret?
That's what this makes me feel. Reflection.
And it's amazing.
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Thank you for this, it is beautiful. I like these lines best.
I still remember the look on your face,
Thinking about it now,
Crying is the only thing i can to do,
Your eyes so lost,
Searching for some kind of signal on my face,
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I can feel your sadness in this heartfelt piece! Best wishes!
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Great ! ! !
I lv it, it is very sad though not my taste but its still FANTASTIC!!!!
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....LOVE IT!
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ohhhh i fucking love you sweety!
i feel sorry for the people that tried to talk to us. i think they thought i was abusing you.
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This is a very good but sad write love can hurt at times.Thank you for sharing and goodluck to you in hte contest.Best wishes
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