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Untimely Destuction

Drugs, Sex and Alcohol,
It's the funnest way to live.
Tossing and turning all night,
Dreaming a wonderland of pills.

Candied coloured clouds float above,
Streaming down a variety of drugs.
Coke, Speed and Ecstacy falling all day,
No worries in this neverland.

Tilting my head back impatiently,
Swallowing shots of Tequilla.
Drowning my thoughts in drugs and liquor,
Loosing myself permanently in an intoxicated state.

To late now to stop this untimely destruction,
There's no one around to disapoint.
Soaring freely without a damn care,
There's no need here to fake perfection.

Author notes

This is a poem that I wrote the other night while catching a pretty wicked buzz..its about battling with addiction to drug.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    Interesting

    its interesting you should say that in your powem uor ending because what about the friends you have made who care and love you. I just realzied yuou were tlaking a totyally different angle UGH! * shoots self * any ways good poem and keep up the good work. Signed, Paul

  • Lady Jean
    October 15, 2007
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    wow i love the use of words and i love the poe

  • Myjoy gold member
    October 15, 2007

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    Dreary truth

    How so many of us can relate, I have only ran into one thing I could of been addiced too, but I am strong and have never let a vice control me. The thoughts in this peices are wonderfuly destructive. Well done.