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The Cell that

I am here,
Invisible to the world and its business.

I always was scared I'd be cast into Hell and forgotten completely.

I don't think this is quite Hell yet,
But I believe I have been forgotten.

If I ever really existed.

Did I exist?

Was I really a person,
Breathing in ambitions, dreams, goals, achievements,
Breathing out fears, failures, disappointments, and bad days?

I can't remember anymore.

My God, I can't remember anymore.

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Hm.

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  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    November 4, 2007

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    The Border Guardian

    Thank you for your submission. Much appreciated.. Kinda hard to read. The question of existence here is believable.

  • Figaro
    October 27, 2007
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    Spooky! I like it. Very powerful.