Rainy days with more empty Plays
Fake friends with their deceitful Ways
Self doubt and shaken Confidence
Second guesses, on what your life has truly Meant
No Daddy!, So No Daddy!!
Live life with phony smiles, and a soul that's just not Happy
Remember that day, engrained on a young Membrane
Of being told, You are my Biggest Mistake
Time to come to grips, with all the hurtful Quips
The many memories, of an isolated and tortured Youth
Living your years forward, under guises of false Pretenses
But time's dis-guise always catches up, to everyone's Truth
Always repressed, always stressed to stay Focused
Feeling my success, would make your "Biggest Mistake" go Away
But to hide from what you feel, is to isolate the Real
And build a timebomb destined, to detonate on a future Day
Tick, Tick, Tick, can I handle this shit
I walk the edge, as repressed emotions harbor on Explode
Tock, Tock, Tock, who truly gives a Fuck
Blackout! as I watch my spirit, start to Implode
Now you ponder this place, for you fit in No Place
Now considering your being born, was truly the Biggest Mistake
Daydreaming of big cake, while staying clear of the bake and Take
Not realizing your only miss take, was ever believing you were ever anyone's Mistake
So you've now paid the price, can life be given to you Twice
For success comes, only after paying the highest Stakes
For it's never too late, and your only Biggest Mistake
Was to ever listen to anyone calling your life! ~The Big Mistake~
No one can ever call you a Mistake
Everyone is here for a Reason
Find It, Live It and Do Your Destiny
Mistakes happen to those who listen to the Negative
and forget to concentrate on the Positive
Their Life!!!
No Longer Just A Believer But....
I've Become A True Believer In Myself And My Worth...
Second Chances Are There, Just Don't Make "The Biggest Mistake" Of Your Life
By Letting Them Slip By....
Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard
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BRAAVO!...Love this one...NO child is a mistake...NOT ONE!. Peace, Rhonda


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Thank you for the excellent feedback on my writings. appreciate your positive feedbnack and taqking the time to read and enjoy my work
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This is really nice... I'm sure it will inspire many people because sometimes you are constantly put down and called a mistake...
No one can ever call you a Mistake
Everyone is here for a Reason
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I liked the last stanza, you're able to form a great story with your words. Nice write.
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dynamical electricity!well done!
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STAY UP && STAY BL3SS3D
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bravo bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dis is an amazing piece i love it beautiful and emotional
great write!!!!

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