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- Sweet Serenity - (Annunciata's Haiku)

Twilight serenades
Tranquil midnight masquerades
In the pure heart of her love

Author notes

FYI--Annunciata is the protagonist in the novel I am currently reading...It's cool---She's a lot like me/Scarlett...But hey...The same person right?! LOL
Written October 8th, 2003

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  • Christabell
    October 19, 2003
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    excellent haiku... some authors try to cram too much into those few lines, but you managed to get your point across without doing that. Congrats.

    ~Christy


  • Bluestar
    October 9, 2003
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    what a beautiful write!! Am able to see the backgrounds as well cozs am at school at the mo! Love the background and most of all the poem
    Much love to you
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx

  • MysticRoseTears
    October 8, 2003
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    cool poem... this better not be about the book that i have been waiting to come out is it??? if it is yyou BETTER/MUST let me borrow it and read it because i dont get to go out and buy a book every weekend you lucky duck...oh well great poem

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    «´¨`·..¤* ArIaNa * ¤..·´¨`»
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