The Gift~ Chain of Four
Sending you karma
My heart embraces your heart
Uniting in love
Sending joy to you
Transcending the universe
From my heart to yours
Oh my dearest love
You are a lotus blossom
To all my senses
Sight, mind and body
Overwhelmed with love for you
Suspended in bliss
Author notes
This is to my dear Eagle!
This wonderful photo is called
Lotus Blossom by Guo Chao Sun
Please tell me what you think
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Sweet. You have said nothing more than you needed to say, and that's what I really appreciate in poetry.
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Beautiful
This is a statement of love that springs from the page and into the heart and mind of the reader. Your choice of words is elegant and appropriate to the picture. Chains like this are a new concept for me personally, but if each one I read is as good as this, they will soon become a favored style.
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First of all, I apologize for not being Eagle. I couldn't help but examine another piece of your work. Your poetry is like a angelic stimulant-it rejuvenates the soul when one is down in the dumps. The lyrics are merely a rainbow of serenity. I'll keep note to read your poetry when I'm down. It's quite uplifting. Well done and take care!
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You have a way of writing that make the reader feel very relax, when reading your piece, you did a really great job writing this, the imagery is really clear, and what really great about this is that you created a chain of Haiku with this piece, perfect.
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Sweet poem with an eastern religious flair. Well expressed sentiments of everlasting love. The photo is quite lovely too, almost like to sweethearts, together. Good write... Ithica
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Wow
It is a lovely poem here, one of dashing beauty. I enjoyed the honor of reading these heavenly words.
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