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Stolen From A Dream..

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The silvery jewels across the sky
Together they gleam
With the moon, casting her brightest beam;

The breeze piercing the silence high
And flowers adding to the amorous theme
~ A perfect night, stolen from a dream.

The whole world, but a paradise,
Setting the stage for you and me,
As we talk besides the scintillant sea..

Locked in reverie
And feel the smile of stars come down
The worls is ours, the night - our crown!


The silvery jewels across the sky
Together they gleam
With the moon, casting her brightest beam;

And the lucid clouds hold her veil
With twinkling stars, like gathered flowers
Drenching the scene with graceful showers;

As the moon glances down
She sees her face, in his eyes
~ The waters reflecting the skies..

And we had to pause
To admire and gaze
Watch the game, the high land plays..

There could be, not a better love
None greater than this ethereal pair
Romancing their way, through the air..

With all the charm and sweetness that stays
They go on and on.. each time new ~
The blushing moon and the seas in blue..

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  • Legend silver member
    October 18, 2007

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    dear raspberry i long ago ceased to be amazed with your work.Now i just take as norm that you will produce excellent work.I love the rhyme pattern used here.A wonderful piece Congratulations on it award


  • Sonja
    October 16, 2007

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    This is so nice poem, gentle, romantic and strong at the same time like the real garden of love could be. Bravo my dear friend.
    ~Sonja~

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 15, 2007

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    This is just beautiful, thank you for your precious entry, Josephine


  • capricornpoet
    October 15, 2007

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    enchanting

    Ethereal as the moon metaphorically embraces the sea, its blue and light of the moon ...personification of love so fluid through the weave..magic sparkle.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 15, 2007

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    Simply beautiful with some amazing imagery here
    my friend! Thanks a lot for sharing this one
    and all the best to you with it in this contest!
    Keep up the great work here!




    Jeremy0826

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