Soft flutter of wings
Peace of mind, calm washes
Cleanses the soul, my soul
In turn for pain to go
For life to renew itself
For depression to be soothed
Grinding days, pass slow
Horrific nightmares are
Extinguished, fears nonexistent
Vision in white, angelic
Harvested feelings of peace
Adorance of life, this life
And the next, truthful
Ready for any and all
Knowing, wise, tender
'Come child', you're ready
Bracing, holding yourself
You take a hand, and float
Please tell me what you think.
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Marvelous, brilliant concieved and very ably penned poem here, full of hope! Excellent! I absolutely loved it! Bravo!
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Thank you for the comment.
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Beautiful poem. Good write.
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This poem gives me a sense of hope, It flows easily, with friendly words, and good imagry, Generally I like it, especially the last stanza, nice work!
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hey there. haven't read your poetry for a long time. this is a great one, though. i love the vision in white, angelic harvested feelings of peace adorance of life, this life. that is my favorite part in this poem. and i alss like the last stanza. then again, i like all of it. we'll just say that.
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i like the feeling in this poem. its entrancing
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This is great too, nice and short, but to the point, a strong hopeful message behind it, Love the feel of it, the way it flows and the imagry. It made me smile, good for you
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It's now finished.... If you want to read all of it at once.
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