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The Painting

Soft bristles dipped in colors
of every mood
raked the clear canvas
gifted by him

fresh green lawn
soaked in golden sun
filtered warm honey hues

across the saline pools
in moist eyes
a rainbow voiced her heart

his squared fingers
brushed her satin cheeks
with soft playful shades

a tinge of light blush upon lips
dissolved short giggles
within a wide landscape

the picture of her pale soul
merged beautifully
inside the frame of his charm









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its good to get back to painting class!!

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  • Sudarshan
    October 28, 2007

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    Perfect combination of despair and Hope

    You definetly know how to paint your words into a perfect picture. This poem is a perfect combination of despair and hope. There is so much going on in our lives the only thing that keeps us going is hope and your poem overflows with it, especially the last paragraph. A lovely read and yeah it feels good for sure to get back to the painting class, hope you paint many more wonders.


  • FindingFaith
    October 15, 2007

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    Lovely again. I enjoyed the last line. Everything is better framed... I like the title you gave the list. God Bless and best wishes.


  • inder silver member
    October 15, 2007

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    Exquisite pening!

    These are some rare brush strokes on a poetic canvas.Love the vibrant colours and aroma of rich metaphors.A true delight in the morning Ankeeta! my congratulations on this nice effort.


  • Titus gold member
    October 15, 2007
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    Mexicalli Rose coloured.

    As I see, a darker shade here, I guess it's because of me. and my guess is, with that beautiful backgraoumd, anyone reading this will in effect see a contrasting aura which is theirs. I alas, see a pretty picture, but not mine! Full marks for a cheery verse which somehow contrasts with mine!


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 15, 2007
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    this is very beautiful, love the picture you painted with your imagery. excellent write, and I delighted in reading this very much ~blessings~

    • Ankeeta silver member
      October 15, 2007
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      I had given up few hobbies back in school..and painting is one of them but now am getting back to it especially when the colors are gifted to me...and its another beautiful way of expressing myself

      thanks ya


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 15, 2007
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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

    When one loves another to them everything seems like a beautiful picture.

  • Titus gold member
    October 15, 2007

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    The intermittent true light, between each colour I'd asssume, there is something quite canny along with my write. Nice job.

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