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The Fortress

a bird above
and sun below
golden hours
signed passion in throe
future's sight
enriched, enthralled
fortress and might
are no longer walled.

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  • crimsondew silver member
    October 16, 2007
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    Beautiful...Like the flow here..

    • lkcl gold member
      October 17, 2007
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      thank youuu. it's in response to a friend's poem.