as we waste away what is to come
and dream of what had been
we're left with nothing to fill the void
to give us peace within
and as we sit we wonder why
our world had come to this
the hole in me continues to grow
but nothing compared to his
i count the tears that roll down my cheek
and measure the love thats lost
he sits and watches his life diminish
remembering his cost
and now within me is his pain
the questions he could not answer
in him there is a beatless heart
filled with his own cancer
we waste away what had been
dreaming of what will be
and we're left with nothing to fill the void
of our addiction to life's debris
Author notes
i dont kno why and i dont totally kno to whom...but i feel it and it hurts... and i want it to go away...
A contest entry
- Liquid Life by NueteredBuddah.
300 points, ended January 4, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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a very beautiful though sad write. I'm not sure how much it fits with the image, but it is very emotional. Thank you for entering.
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omg~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ this is TOTALLY AMAZING~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i kinda wanted to cry......i feel so bad for you .........ahh idk but it is amazing and i love it so so so much your so beatiful
i love you so much///////yay evil is gone today
!!!i love yu oso much!!!
sash stone
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