At first it was thought time could heal all the pain,
But have you ever noticed that it's still going,
Have you ever noticed that you can still feel the rain?
Surely you must've noticed you're still rowing.
If time could take back this one huge childish fight,
Then after nearly 13 years,
Why does it still take so much strength, so much might?
Why does the blood still fall and mingle with tears?
It's festering and it's never going to get better,
Until someone goes and gets the cure.
I still wonder why I tried to send that last letter,
I still wonder why you were such a lure.
Oh look, there finally comes clarity,
When all flames have turned to wet ash,
And all those wounds have developed into quite the annoying rash.
What a parody..
Ehm.. feedback appreciated?
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This is well written I love this.....
Excellent Job....



