and this sun refuses to
hide your
soft pale gloriousness. even
its angles bow to such a
pristine canvas as this. i
stayed awake for what seemed
days, but the sunshine both my
saving grace and my
prison. walked along the
ocean shore and found you in a
thousand waves, buckling to the
shoreline. i broke like smoke and
dissipated like the tide, and you
drifted away, my
solitary cloud
Please tell me what you think
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one of the magical things about your poetry is that you always make me "feel" it...and so delicately and so beautifully and so subtle that i don't even realize its happening til i'm done reading.
nice -
Wow!!
A blessing to see that quill dancing across these pages my Friend
Thank You for sharing Your words!
Love this!
You take the reader there on Journey alongside
You
Many blessings to You Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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bravo, as usual.
walked along the
ocean shore and found you in a
thousand waves
This is an amazing line.
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as always......... so wonderful
~ w
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