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Liebe

you are my light
my beacon
my hope
my dream
you hold me
in the darkness
and give me my
tomorrow

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  • Shockerloba
    November 2, 2007
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    short sweet and with perfect balance! your poetry is always so heartfelt.

  • Virgoan
    October 21, 2007
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    Short and powerful. Nicely done

    Keep writing and best of luck.

    VIRGOAN