You are sublime,
like cherry's mixed with lemon lime.
Your intriguing,
Like everything i keep believing.
Your insane,
screwed up in pain.
But
your still you
And that's all i want.
Can you see this?
Its my soul.
Can you feel this?
Its the mad beating of my heart.
Pounding away bruising my organs
with love
for you
Relish in it
Hold it
and let it go.
I delight in you,
and your magic skin.
Can you open your eyes,
and somehow let me in?
I'm crying
things that have no meaning,
My eyes keep tearing
as if their bleeding.
But it doesnt matter,
If its for you
its perfect,
its worth it,
Its orgasmic.
A contest entry
- Options For Love by lesbian-in-love.
475 points, ended October 30, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
..#1
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Awesome!!!!!!
That was just amazing. Wow. I loved the word choices. It keeps me captivated. Very well written. Just loved the lines I'm crying
things that have no meaning,
My eyes keep tearing
as if their bleeding.
But it doesnt matter,
If its for you
its perfect,
its worth it,
Its orgasmic.
They just stick out the most. Thanks for entering and good luck to you in the contest. -
"I'm crying
things that have no meaning,
My eyes keep tearing
as if their bleeding.
But it doesnt matter,
If its for you
its perfect,
its worth it,
Its orgasmic."
DAMMMNNNN! that was awesome gir. Really powerful right, you blew me away
Much Love
--dani♥
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If its for you
its perfect,
its worth it,
Its orgasmic.
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I loved this.
...Simply Me♥ -
simply beautiful
the most precious words spoken are those to someone you adore and love so much!
well done poet
♥ Dani -
Very nice. Sort of simple, but powerful nonetheless. Great job.
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Awesome word choice. This was just amazing. I really enjoyed it.... I don't really know if the background exactly goes with the poem... but other than that this was just an outstanding piece.
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