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Contradiction only smothered her insides.

this Turret came crashing down upon my fantasies
    oh what will we do now

my consecutive train of thought had me rolling on a passage of Immunity
Disfunction could describe our petty reminisces

    call me out,
who said I told the truth One Hundred Percent of the time

But, was it Worth it?
I conjure up Honesty so tell me who you are.
  I am but a cookie-cutter,[[Perfect]],example of Redundancy
which keeps falling into your lap every time the sun hits horizon.
When Convenience is at its most Dire opportunity.

your ignominy forced somewhat of a vortex on our cherishes
for a fact, it sucked us in.

what a crucial stage for plausible abandonment,

        Doll, I saw it comming from a mile away.
I guess you weren't the Hercules I sought you out to be.

  What insignifigance has you you calling out for Mercy this time?
When will you wake up and Join the humane race;
don't you relize it's [[too late]] for Dream-Catcher Lullabies and Somber Ruthlessness.

  Never before have you shown such putrid Negativity.
So I imperiously fought my way through your crowd of overbearing antagony.
and I have Won this battle with bare hands and Livid, yet Eternal Courage.



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lots of vocab used here

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  • withoutlove13
    October 5, 2008
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    Tripp

    Ah, your incrediblllle!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    October 28, 2007

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    Yes lots of Vocab use, but so well done.
    This says so much.
    I love your big words and I admire people who arent afraid to use them and place them in so well. You did it perfectly.
    I just loved ---
    What insignifigance has you you calling out for Mercy this time?
    When will you wake up and Join the humane race;
    don't you relize it's [[too late]] for Dream-Catcher Lullabies and Somber Ruthlessness.

    Wow, this is one I think I will come back to again, such a strong voice coming throug with it

    An excellent penned piece here