My dearest friend,
I can never let you go
You mean the world to me,
But how am I to let you know?
For all of the things that you have done,
I can not describe in audible words all that you have brought to me
For the short blessings I know as our time together.
I trust you with my heart,
I debate with you with my mind,
And you in return do for me the same.
I am truly blessed and thankful that God put you into my life,
But I don't think I will be able to conceive as to why he did for a long time.
I love you with all me heart my dearest friend.
Thank you
Author notes
Hillo I am hav-u-ever-imagined and this is actually one of my practice free writes. ^_^ I've been having some issues with a really close friend of mine and instead of writing something that would make me even more depressed I figured I should write something about what he was done for me.
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That's an awesome idea and an awesome poem! Well done, my free-writes are never this good!
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This is good. It shows that u care for ur friend and i really like this poem. Good luck in my contest
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As a first impression, it looks like a christmas tree, but that doesnt take away the beauty of the words that branch out to give such a sweet dedication to whoever this friend may be. You have obviously been touched by this gift of friendship, and it's plain to see that in each line.
xtremely well done
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yay
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okay i really like this..
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