i love him,
the world of love brought us together,
how could i not see,
how could i not tell,
the melody died,
so did our love,
i so failed to see the calmness of your face,
i did'nt know you was dead until it was late,
he was my life,
a friend to all,
as we walk by,
we did not see,
the tears in his eyes
amo le ,
el mundo de amor traido Estados Unidos de América junto ,
cómo podía yo no ver ,
cómo podía yo no decir ,
el melón died ,
así hacía nuestro amor ,
yo así fallado ver el calma de su cara ,
yo hacía no conocer usted estado muerto hasta que estuvo retrasado ,
él estaba Dios mío ,
un amigo permitir ,
como caminamos por ,
nosotros hacía no ver ,
el lágrima en de él ojos
A contest entry
- heartbroken by the one you love by Purple-Meow.
525 points, ended October 23, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great write
Oh yes I feel your every word here and it befalls so many not seeing what is right before their eyes
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i loved the feelings and two languages very odd but nice thanks lots for entering
GOOD LUCK
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Great
that was really nice. . .
once again. . .two languages
is a good idea
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its not my fault i can't help it
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