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One-One-Two-One

I am next to no one,
in a bed,
in a brown shirt with
crooked seams,
thin, soft, and warm.

I am recoiled, and my collarbone
digs into the pad of my hand.

I am not sleeping,
and I'm wondering
if certain others are.

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A terrified return. I haven't done this in a long while.

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