E'er so much as the world turned,
Thoughts of a better world unfurled;
But there sat a boy, not much younger than I,
And all he could think was that he wanted to die;
Because in this world it was another day another dime,
He came into this world way before his time;
He would've done better in the old Wild West,
But now, he just can't seem to give dark thoughts a rest;
That odd but good sensation he can still feel,
The feeling on his wrists of the cold steel;
Every night he hears his dead friends cries,
And inside of him, more and more each day, a little of him dies;
It's time to end the terrible pain,
The pain of life, the horrible thoughts of going insane;
Just get away from this horrible place, end it all, he thinks,
These thoughts are on his mind and deeper and deeper the blade sinks;
The thoughts begin to fade, the lights go dim, and then he is gone,
He may be dead, but the memory of that young boy lives on;
These are the thoughts of another young boy,
Wondering why friends do that to friends, to steal their joy;
And every night when he lays down to sleep,
All those thoughts into his mind do creep;
Trying hard not to deliver the same ending as so many,
Wanting to take life for every penny;
Now, to most, none of this might make sense,
But to him, it's the story of his fragile existence.
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful write absolutely awesom


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this is awesome nick...its sad tho...but i love it too!!!!


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Sad write but well done!


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The flow and the words are very well written, i especially like your ending lines. Good job.
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This poem is fricken amazing. Course, I already told ya that. I'm sorry though, cause it's so sad. But, I know you'll pull through. *hugs* and great write!
*snap*

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