i met you
through words
i found you with heart
i saw you with unseeing eyes
your words they are strong
your wisdom is long
i wish not to lose you in life
i know not where you go
but i hope god carries your soul
and the winds treats you gentle in life
this poem doesnt do justice to the woman intrusted but thats how i feel tonight
goodluck my friend
A contest entry
- Moving on with poetryality - Invited only!!! by Mari Goes.
1400 points, ended October 25, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very Lovley again Congrats on the trophy ever one I have come across has had one that's great.
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Very good
Within the whispers of others true friendship feelings all shall share
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This was nice. I like the part of I saw you with unseeing eyes. That is a beautiful line.
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this is great. i love it. its so peaceful and moving.
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That is the impression she makes
I've known Renee for almost 4 years now, and since the very beginning she has being a great support. Her words always come in a soft way, and her helpful hand is always available to us.
And she has the most sweet voice
Thanks for your warm and lovely entry!
Mari
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What a beautiful tribute to your dear friend! Sometimes it's almost humbling how powerful written word can really be, but we all witness it here on this site every day or so. I, too, have met some great people right here, and it's amazing how much they can change your life. Your friend sounds like a beautiful person. I enjoyed reading this.
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This is very heartfelt. Nicley done.
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You are my new found blessing dear lady. It is with great pleasure that we were placed in one another's paths. Although we just met not long ago, I feel as if I've known you for many years. We are kindred spirits and that will make it so we never separate. Thank you for these wonderful sentiments. I am so overwhelmed at the out pour of love. Thank you!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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i love you
you are a true insperation
you warm my heart
god watch your every footstep
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moving
this piece truly moved me.. she is a great woman.. and a great woman of god...
Yvonne
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