My Silent tears,
They come at night
They shall Not see
They shall Not hear
They shall Not know
For I hide them well
To not look weak
To not look frail
My Silent tears
They come at night
But they stay all day
Hidden in my heart.
A contest entry
- I want emotion! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended December 20, 2007, 31 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This is really good. for some odd reason, the title made me think of a quote I have. "No one hears my whispers but everyone hears my silent screams" I don't know why it made me think of that but it did. Nice work, too. I really like ti! thanks for the entry! keep it up! best of luck!
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Thank you for the trophy and also for taking the time to leave such a nice comment. i a, so glad this touched you.
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Thank you, i am glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank You for the comment and for caring...but truly i am alright. Just having to learn to be satisfied being "His dity little secret". Somedays it is not such an easy role. *Hugs*
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i'm here if u need to talk Katie
tears seem a lot less heavy when caught by someone willing to wipe them away ...
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