Hello, my sweet darling,
We've got a crazy little thing called love
having found a way into each others' heart
always and forever, our love is here to stay
with or without you, you're in my heart and life
This I promise you, faithfully, with open arms
I'll be there for you, always by your side
lighting up our lives with every breath we take
Letting love lead us the way to our desires
I can't fight the feelings any longer;
tonight's the night, wanting to forever hold you, love you
I want you for always
I need you now
light my fire
kiss the flames of our desires
tenderly, taking a slow hand
caressing my inner soul of passion
Just you and I,
we've been dreaming of this night
taking you in deeper and deeper
we are one, melting together in heated desires
emotions truly burning within our souls
touch me all night long 'til morning light,
envelope me in your arms
kissing each other all over
releasing passionate wonders to be found
Every time I don't hear from you
when you go away for so long
I miss you more with each passing day
whenever I see you smile, I know you love me too
I can't smile without you in my life,
for I'm so lost within your love
You're always on my mind
every season, every day of the year
I'm amazed by the love we have for each other,
it's no wonder I fall more in love with you each day
As long as you love me the eternal way that you do,
our endless love will be almost paradise, inspiring
You're my sunshine, my rose of life; I'm your angel star
I just want to be your everything, the reason to breathe
PS. I love you more than my words can ever say
truly, madly, deeply, with infinite words of love
I want to grow old with you;
our love is purely magical
Author notes
PROMPT: Special Love Dedication
A contest entry
- Sensual Dedications...For AP Women Only. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 18, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Serenade by second-born.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sis,
Ok, this sounds like something I tried saying to another, and just never able to find the right words! I hope this person knows that this is what I felt and still do feel, but yet I lost on that one
You show much love and heartfelt emotions in this one! I love it!
and love
Nyetta
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Such a very heart felt piece of love and sincere adoration. Very moving write, with so much emotion coursing within.. *sigh* This is just beautiful sis!!!
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You must be in love dear poet…for this poem is full of sweet and loving thoughts that could only come from a pure heart who is experiencing the magic called ‘love…’ thank you for sharing a ‘melodious’ write…
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Very lovely and beautifully written my dear
friend! All the best to you with this one in
the contest! Keep up the wonderful work here.
Jeremy0826 -
very good and thank you for entering!! Best of luck to you!!
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This is such a lovely, personal, celebration of all that you love about and for and with one person, that I can not be critical at all. I can only celebrate that your heart and joy flow so freely and openly.
Love, Tom B.
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That dear is sweet and loving for the guy of your life.
Now dear he is the luckiest man alive and if he does not know it then he does not deserve you and your love.
Now this should be looked at as a background for a love ballad.
Good luck
Riftkin
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-hugs-
You and your sweet, tender, romantic heart sings such beauty through your soul afar...that soars through blue skies into the heavens my sweet angelic star. Thanks for sharing such divine love from above that is as pure as a snow white dove. Bless you sweet star. Shine On! Much love always, and forevermore...... 
-Timothy
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Wow This is an amazing poem you have penned
Love the imagery and wording indeed
Someone's out there loving you tonight.
This is beautiful
great job
Best of wishes to you alwys.
Tony
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Oh my goodness sweet sister.
This is stunning in all it lovely beauty....
each word woven together to make such a heart felt
piece. You should be so proud of yourself and
the lucky guy well he will be oh so pleased for sure...
this. and good luck to you in the contest
delila
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There is one lucky man out there that should be doing everything he can to get back from his travels. To find such warmth waiting for him and never, ever, ever let go. Very wonderful way of stating the hearts desire in such a caring, special way.
Best to you in the contest and life!
Mouser
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